Ch. 21 Deal With the Devil

March 17th, 2011, 7:49 pm
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Butterscotch
March 17th, 2011, 7:52 pm
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Ch. 21 Cover Adrian used ZASH! It's super effective!

This is what happens when you play Pokemon for eight hours.
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highspeed (Guest)
March 17th, 2011, 8:13 pm
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I know how you feel oh, and my 1st 1st comment!
DracheLehre
March 18th, 2011, 1:15 am
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lol Pik-Adrian is cute
SFG (Guest)
March 18th, 2011, 7:49 am
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So THAT'S what you drew...very cute!
Shadow_Da_Hedgie
March 18th, 2011, 12:25 pm
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Oddly enough, the first thing I thought when seeing this was 'Hello legs! O_O' Those shorts are TINY.

The only complaint I has is, due to Angela's pose, one of her legs looks short compared to the other. I know it's cuz one is beant, but it still looks kinda off, like one of the boots is bigger that the other.

Adrian's Movelist:
Slash(ZASH!)
Thunderbolt/Thunder (Magic)
Stomp
Pursuit (LAMPOST MAN IS A STALKER)
SpecterHSC
March 18th, 2011, 5:04 pm
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I'm suprised no one made a comment about the chapter title yet. Like is Lyla the implied "devil" or is it a different third party devil. Or is it worse still the Egg King and his secret to making SPICY DEVILED EGGS?

I apologize for that last one. I'm running on a lot of lack of sleep.
Salimus
March 18th, 2011, 9:12 pm
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Pika-Adrain = REALLY CUTE!!! <3

... >:3

*throws pokaball*
RazorD9
March 18th, 2011, 10:30 pm
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Super effective indeed.
Beware of making deals with the devil. They tend to go sour in the end.
Grey_Wolf_Leader
March 19th, 2011, 4:45 pm
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Darn it, it's been so long since I've last played Poke'mon. I love those games, but being an adult means I've got to put up with tons of college homework. Not exactly the most fun thing ever.
Butterscotch
March 20th, 2011, 3:24 pm
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replies! @highspeed: yay for your first comment! ^^

@Drache: He's based off raichu, actually.

@Sfg: Thanks! Did you think I was joking?

@Shadow: Thanks. I knew there was something off about the legs

@specter: Deviled eggs

@Salimus: NAIDRAUG was caught! Give a nickname to the captured NAIDRAUG?

@Razor: sometimes, but I think I've read more stories where the devil is outwitted in some way.

@GWL: The new games are pretty good. I think I still liked the remakes of Gold and Silver better though.
Shadow_Da_Hedgie
March 21st, 2011, 7:13 am
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AH! I've got it! It's the knees. On the left (her left, our right) leg, the knee needs to be facing the front a little more, as it is now it looks kinda like that leg is bent too.