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August 15th, 2011, 8:30 pm
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Butterscotch
August 15th, 2011, 8:44 pm
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429 And Luke drops another F-bomb.. My personal view on swearing is that swear words are supposed to be shocking, and that the less you use them, the more effective they are. Basically, I'm a big believer in the Precision F Strike.
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Shadow_Da_Hedgie
August 15th, 2011, 8:55 pm
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"I DIDN'T RIP MY EYE...
OUT OF MY FUCKING SKULL...
FOR YOU TO NOT TAKE IT!"

Adrian wasn't expecting an eye, he was expecting one of the items the Princess bought... But they weren't his to give in any case. I imagine Adrian is as shocked as any of us... But I'd be pissed too if I ripped MY eye out just to have someone not take it...

Poor Luke... What I said earlier in the chapter about him deserving to lose an eye... I didn't mean this... I wonder how shocked Lyla will be...

... Oddly though, I want to draw some art based on this... I'll probably have some hair covering most of the eye socket though...
RazorD9
August 15th, 2011, 11:57 pm
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Don't imagine Adrian carrying bottles with him, wrong comic for that.

Precision F strike eh? Glad to know there's a name for that. Only had to drop two in my own comic, least uncensored, for that nice weighted effect.
SpecterHSC
August 16th, 2011, 12:26 am
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For some reason now I have a strong feeling that the eye doesnt really do anything. Its just a symbol of his dedication to Lyla and just what he would do for her.

I agree your lack of cursing does make it that much more shocking and adds value rather then take away. Excellent writing once again. Cant wait for more.
sfg (Guest)
August 16th, 2011, 4:34 am
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Take the eye Adrian...just pack it in salt.
Lockman
August 16th, 2011, 3:25 pm
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Wow.
SpecterHSC
August 19th, 2011, 8:00 am
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@sfg: no not salt that will just dry out the juices. You need to wrap it in air tight plastic and pack with ice and water. Or is it just ice?
Shadow_Da_Hedgie
August 20th, 2011, 12:00 pm
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Specter, if you do that all the fluids will freeze or become diluted in the water.

I would suggest just putting it in a jar/LOZ style bottle.

Adrian: DA-NA-NA-NA! I GOT LUKE'S LEFT EYE!... crap, my health is low and I only have one bottle. I should have gotten a fairy or LonLon Milk instead...
SpecterHSC
August 20th, 2011, 7:47 pm
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but if you put it in an empty jar LoZ style wont the juices just run out too and spoil from heat? Man preserving an eye is harder then we thought.
sfg (Guest)
August 21st, 2011, 9:02 am
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Prehaps it should be pickled?
Shadow_Da_Hedgie
August 22nd, 2011, 8:11 am
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Or... maybe they should use the magic of bubblewrap?

Or they just need to put it in a bottle then leave it in the fridge...
Butterscotch
August 22nd, 2011, 5:13 pm
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replies @Shadow_Da_Hedgie: DO IT! DO IT! I haven't gotten fanart in a long time!

@RazorD9: There's a trope for everything.

@SpecterHSC: Nope, it's magic.

@sfg: wouldn't that dry it out? D:

@Lockman: Good wow or bad wow? DX
Shadow_Da_Hedgie
August 23rd, 2011, 7:21 am
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@Butterscotch: I'm considering it. There is still a picture marked as Angela when the picture is of Jade in the fanart page though.

Edit: Forget about considering it. http://shadow-da-hedgie.deviantart.com/art/Luke-The-Reborn-Fan-art-254590512