What kind of art program are you using? Your lines and shading are really good, but you could be more dynamic with the lettering. Like, if you have any way of manipulating the lettering, that would really put a lot of punch in your work, and it would better match your art.

You should find some lettering tutorials online. I think you'd really benefit. Keep up the good work!

posted by Mr. Neil on 17 Feb 2006 11:38 am

@Mr. Neil- She said Gimpo (eh, Gimp. I call it Gimpo).

@Butters- OH! I like the legs in the 5th frame.

posted by TKGB_Cocker on 17 Feb 2006 01:12 pm

@Mr. Neil: yeah, I agree the sound effect fall kinda flat X_x
I'll try and work on that

@TKBG_Cocker: I like the way the legs came out too

@Aquilo: Yep, she's not completly defenselfess ^_~

@Mimi: lol, yeah, she has good aim! ^-^

posted by Butterscotch on 17 Feb 2006 10:02 pm

The back pack of justice! Thunk!

posted by RazorD9 on 17 Feb 2006 11:46 pm

no, the poor baby!

posted by daidaishar on 19 Feb 2006 01:05 am

This Comic is terrible. Those Wolves attack the girl. Wolves are JACKASSES!

posted by Flame Chocobo on 19 Feb 2006 07:59 pm

Um, well, they are kind of the bad guys here O_o;

posted by Butterscotch on 19 Feb 2006 10:44 pm

Angela used Bag-smack!
It's not very effective.

posted by Shadow (Guest) on 28 Oct 2008 11:04 am