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February 19th, 2006, 10:35 pm
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Butterscotch
February 19th, 2006, 10:37 pm
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Page 20 Trying to get more interesting fonts, and also the backgrounds are slightly more detailed than normal.

Anyway, Angela has made the classic mistake of darting down a dark alley. She's panicking, ok? >_>
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Cerise
February 19th, 2006, 10:54 pm
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I have a good sense of the action from the panels, and I know how hard it is to do a brick wall, but the placement of the crates and the wall are a little akward. You might want to study perspective a bit more.

Oh the baby is so cute and evil, I want to cuddle it!
daidaishar
February 19th, 2006, 11:47 pm
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which leads us to a new question, are the babies cuddleable? I mean, they look as if they could be shadow/smoke constructs, or their fur could be all bristly. I do hope that they are cuddly though.
Butterscotch
February 20th, 2006, 12:00 am
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They're quite solid; fur is a bit rough, like some large breeds of dogs though
daidaishar
February 20th, 2006, 12:20 am
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hmm, my dog's got kinda bristly fur ( she's a labrador) but she's huggable, so I'd say that yes, in that case the babies are cuddleable *cuddles one*
Butterscotch
February 20th, 2006, 9:31 pm
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@Aquilo, thanks. I'm working on the sound effects ^^

@Mimi, Machine gun? O_o;
Mr. Neil
February 21st, 2006, 12:37 am
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A little better. Try using more atypical onomotapias for your action sounds. The "SHP" noise is an example of a good atypical onomotapia.

You should also think about reading some tutorials about how to do backgrounds. There are simple ways of doing depth that would really fix some of the wonky brickwork you've got on this page.

I'm not trying to knock you down. I actually like your work. In fact, I wouldn't be so overly critical if I didn't feel a wind from the future. Your style looks like it has a lot of growth potential. I'm sure that in a few years, you'll be amazing.
Butterscotch
February 21st, 2006, 9:51 am
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Perspective It's not that I can't do proper perspective, I just don't like to. The first few pages were all done with a ruler and the backgrounds feel stiff, and were a chore to draw.
Free-hand backgrounds don't feel stiff, and are fun for me to draw. But then we get wonky bricks X_x
I'll have to find a happy medium between the two, but since the next two pages are already inked, and I don't have the time to redraw them, you'll have to wait a bit. ^_^
Biora
February 21st, 2006, 2:37 pm
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I like your style very much! Angela is the cutest!!!
Butterscotch
February 21st, 2006, 5:40 pm
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Thanks ^^
Flame Chocobo
February 24th, 2006, 8:59 pm
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Still Chased by a wolf. *Get's Blown up* Uhh Great! *Get's Blown up* OWWWWWWW!! Dammit! THis is awesome. *Get's cured*
Butterscotch
February 24th, 2006, 10:48 pm
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Um, thanks ^^;
Miruku
March 1st, 2006, 6:33 pm
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Perspective suggestion You could try starting out by lightly pencilling everything in with the "proper" perspective and a ruler and what not first, and then go over it again darker, but freehand it and make it look more realistic and not so sterile, and then ink that layer...?

I dunno. Just a suggestion. That's what I try to do when I feel like my ruler has taken over the page.
Butterscotch
March 1st, 2006, 9:46 pm
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That's a good idea! Thankies
^-^
Yaoi_Queen665
March 22nd, 2007, 7:55 pm
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rule # 1 in running away from things that could kill you = never run in to an alley...
Grey_Wolf_Leader
June 26th, 2009, 2:44 am
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Oh, I can't look! *hides face*

Tell me when it's over!

*peeks through fingers*
Kiki (Guest)
December 28th, 2010, 7:26 pm
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Alley, classical for the average horror movie/comic or romance movie/comic >:)
NuzlockingMagma
March 8th, 2011, 5:07 pm
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Yeah yeah Yes, Angela, slam the wall, that'll make it fall down so you may excape OH WAIT-

I just started reading this and it has a light tone to it, but serious nonetheless <3