Yeah, Ive noticed the poor naming of some of the things you've done.

posted by Jimmy (Guest) on 28 Feb 2006 11:46 pm

I have dial up so the images take a while to load so I read the comments during loading time.

When it loaded up, I scrolled up quickly and the page spooked me. OI!

HAHAHA!

Grand. 5.

posted by TKGB_Cocker on 28 Feb 2006 11:55 pm

@Jimmy..um, ok

@Aqulo: whoops, I left the name off the ch. one cover, didn't I? Ch. One was called Sweet Sixteen

@TKBG_Cocker: BOO! :P

posted by Butterscotch on 01 Mar 2006 12:05 am

Great story! Normally I start getting distracted when I'm reading through a whole comic (even though this one isn't that long yet), but I was totally into it this time!

It's nice to see how you're art and storytelling abilities improve on each page, and in general I think you're doing a great job.

The only thing that bugs me just the teensiest bit is that sometimes the way you draw peoples' heads is a bit...strange. A few times, including this page, they just look kinda squished, so that they're elongated in one direction and shortened in the other, and it gets to look a bit off. But it only happens 2 or 3 times, so no worries.

But yes, definitely faved. I want to see where this is going.

posted by Miruku on 01 Mar 2006 06:44 pm

Thanks! ^-^
I'll try and work on the heads ^^

posted by Butterscotch on 01 Mar 2006 09:47 pm

personally, no offense, but i prefer a good dark brown for trench coats.

posted by Idene (Guest) on 07 May 2007 02:15 pm