Chapter Two Cover Page

February 28th, 2006, 11:19 pm
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February 28th, 2006, 11:21 pm
I'm very pleased with this one. Normally I prefer Adrian with his normal eyes, but I love this one.

But...ugh, I suck at naming things. The name of the chapter is "Adrian" X_x
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Jimmy (Guest)
February 28th, 2006, 11:46 pm
Yeah, Ive noticed the poor naming of some of the things you've done.
March 1st, 2006, 12:05 am
Reply, ok

@Aqulo: whoops, I left the name off the ch. one cover, didn't I? Ch. One was called Sweet Sixteen

@TKBG_Cocker: BOO! :P
March 1st, 2006, 6:44 pm
Great story! Normally I start getting distracted when I'm reading through a whole comic (even though this one isn't that long yet), but I was totally into it this time!

It's nice to see how you're art and storytelling abilities improve on each page, and in general I think you're doing a great job.

The only thing that bugs me just the teensiest bit is that sometimes the way you draw peoples' heads is a bit...strange. A few times, including this page, they just look kinda squished, so that they're elongated in one direction and shortened in the other, and it gets to look a bit off. But it only happens 2 or 3 times, so no worries.

But yes, definitely faved. I want to see where this is going.
March 1st, 2006, 9:47 pm
Thanks! ^-^
I'll try and work on the heads ^^
Idene (Guest)
May 7th, 2007, 2:15 pm
Why RED? personally, no offense, but i prefer a good dark brown for trench coats.
June 26th, 2009, 2:46 am
Actually, I think naming the chapter after the newest character isn't a bad idea. I have seen a lot worse naming in other artworks...