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September 23rd, 2007, 6:20 pm
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Butterscotch
September 23rd, 2007, 6:23 pm
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128! Thanks for all the great comments and critiques on the last page. I had this page (and the next) already drawn, so I wasn't able to use the input I recieved. But I'm mentally filing it away for later use. Anyway, keep those comments coming! ^_^
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Shard
September 23rd, 2007, 6:41 pm
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Tails can be used for three things.

1) Grabbing others.
2) Hitting others.
3) Being pulled back.

Clearly, that's not to her advantage.
Angelzora
September 23rd, 2007, 7:40 pm
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Man, it must suck to have a tail. :p
bloomygirl315
September 23rd, 2007, 7:42 pm
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ok! hair is not stiff (unless it's got pounds of hair spray in it) and hair is also a great way to show motion. In the last pannel for example, you could have Oaks hair moving a bit since she's being pulled. But I think you're usually pretty good about that kind of thing.
Guest
September 24th, 2007, 6:34 pm
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Well, maybe it's not hair?
...on second thought, that would be ceepy! 0_0' I just scared myself XD
Nicely drawn!
PJupiter
September 24th, 2007, 7:56 pm
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i think this link is really helpful for fighting scenes!! they're sooo hard i believe, but this helps!
http://www.polykarbon.com/tutorials/fighting/fight.htm
GothiqueSukkubus
September 24th, 2007, 11:16 pm
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I think this page shows motion muchly better. The motion/speed lines you have in panels 2 and 4 make it look like they're moving rather than just standing still.
I like Oaks' "WTF?!" face in the last panel lots. XD
henred5
September 26th, 2007, 3:36 pm
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hehe...he's got her by the tail.
"Now Adrian swing her over onto the ground!"
RandomPersona (Guest)
September 26th, 2007, 8:38 pm
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Hey this looks nice, the last panal reminds me of two video ames call me an addict. >.< but i think of scorpian from mortal combat or mario with bowsers tail so long de bowser ;D Anyways really nice coloring!
Mika Kana
June 11th, 2009, 8:35 pm
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Lesson 1 for people with tail....
you gotta watch out for a move like that cuz then u pretty much cant do anything ^-^'
Princess 23
May 11th, 2010, 10:59 am
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her tail is no what you'd expect on a creature like that XD