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April 23rd, 2006, 11:03 pm
Page 37 You can really see the texture of the paper here...>_<

In case you can't tell, Angela is standing in front of a book store. :P
The books in the window are Spy Time! and Ghost-o-rama. So far as I know, no such books exists (not that I researched it). But if there *is* a book called Ghost-o-rama, I would very much like to read it, I think.
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April 23rd, 2006, 11:02 pm
... I got the first comment! Whoot!
Your art is still awsome as always^^
April 24th, 2006, 12:02 am
Hmmm, very well, I shall write the book Ghost-o-rama, unless someone beats me to it.In any case, heres a 5 on the Rate-o-meter.
April 24th, 2006, 11:40 am
nice i really like the first panel
April 24th, 2006, 12:25 pm
re RazorD9: No, that is my goal in life now! I'll write it before you, so there! *sticks out tongue*

Anyways, good page, but I really must ask: how old is Adrain? He looks like 30 but acts like 15. You've probably already answered this, but I totally missed it *sweatdrop*.
April 24th, 2006, 1:40 pm
He looks Thirty?! O_o

He's supposed to be 20 ^^;;
April 24th, 2006, 5:02 pm
Most 15 year old boys aren't quite so tall, broad-shouldered or muscular. ^^;
I tried to make him look youthful, but maybe I overdid it. I'm a poor judge of age. X_x
April 24th, 2006, 5:15 pm
I think he looks fine. ^__^ I figured he was in his twenties when I first read this.
Its more realistic if you ask me. I mean, I know some people at my school that have the same build, and they're only 17 XD
April 24th, 2006, 7:09 pm
hehehe eek :P
April 25th, 2006, 12:43 am
I'm not sure why her boobs are so big, but she's blonde because blonde hair looks more innocent to me. I wanted her to look very she has blonde hair, blue eyes, rosy cheeks, wears pink a lot etc. It's a character design

As for the hero, in most of the manga I read, the heroes are more slender. I have nothing against bishonen, but sometimes it's nice to have a more manly man as a hero.

But are you basing your comments solely on appearances, or have you read any of it?
April 25th, 2006, 9:27 am
Lawl Adrian is so confusing xD

Lovely coloring! I actually like the texture of the paper in there ^^
April 25th, 2006, 9:27 pm
That's cool ^-^

I appreciate your honest comments. I'll try and make my characters look less cliche in the future.
Idene (Guest)
May 7th, 2007, 2:26 pm
Adrian is Buff!!! I'm not all that good at drawing muscle, but Adrian is super buff! He looks like the kinda guy that can take a beating from like 20 guys and still be able to yell 'WANT SOME MORE?!?'. creep the hell outta the guys attacking him!