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June 7th, 2009, 4:49 pm
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Butterscotch
June 7th, 2009, 4:49 pm
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261 If you didn't see the newspost, updates are slowing down to once a week for a little while. Sorry.

I should've been more careful about where Monster No. Two had his hands...he looks likes he's groping Violet. O_O
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LazyChocobo
June 7th, 2009, 6:18 pm
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Groping? Ohnoes. D:

RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPE!
Kandri
June 7th, 2009, 6:33 pm
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GROPE?! *kills* You never grope a woman unless you're some kind of hot bishi >.>

Eww, he's drooling *shudders* >_< But great page and coloring! Does he have a leotard, too? O.o
SFG (Guest)
June 7th, 2009, 11:44 pm
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CREEPPY!!!!!!!!!

He looks like he's think how good she'll taste...
Torrent
June 7th, 2009, 11:47 pm
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Hmm... He looks like an old man...

Old man+groping teen...

PEDOOOOOO
SpecterHSC
June 8th, 2009, 1:32 am
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I'm more concerned with the fact no one noteced a loin cloth wearing ashy brown skin monster coming onto the track field until it grabs a student. And yes it totally looks like he is groping her. And people say i'm a perv.

Que Doug and his demon mudhole stomping boots!
Shadow_Da_Hedgie
June 8th, 2009, 4:48 am
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HO MAH GAWD HE'S ATTEMPTING RAPE. D=
Catoni15
June 9th, 2009, 12:32 am
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Wow, did you go digital with this page? It looks *really* nice! Sharp and clean. Your coloring's improved, too! :D

Props for the full pager. Good call on that. Makes it more dramatic that way. Hehe.

Two things, though:

1) The background seems pretty inappopriate for the moment. There should be something more urgent and distressing. I see a lot of blue and little sparkles/trails/something of lights. It feels very mellow and calming to me when it should signal danger and threat. I don't know if you were trying to show the sky in the background or something. But those white things didn't look like clouds to me so I couldn't exactly tell.

2) Poses of both creature and girl seem really static to me. I can understand being frozen with fear, like the girl is too scared to move. But it probably would've looked more urgent if the monster was mid-way into making the kill. Like...I don't know, maybe its mouth open with teeth baring aiming for the throat or something like that? Just to make it more fierce. Because the monster strikes me as looking pretty calm and serene here, too.

Unless that was done on purpose. In which case that comment before is unnecessary, I suppose.

Story's getting good. Can't wait to see what happens next! Pins and needles over here. XD
BabyMarigoldGirl (Guest)
June 11th, 2009, 10:59 am
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haha im laghing to hard i agree with Catoni15 lady. it is good but looks to calming.
Mika Kana
June 11th, 2009, 9:33 pm
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he should really watch those hands -////-
i asked this in many pages before -pokes poofy's hair- sorry for my distractions.... but can u show the steps of how u draw i'd love to know ur secret ^-^
Butterscotch
June 14th, 2009, 5:33 pm
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261 @LazyChocobo: He doesn't want to rape her, he wants to rip her heart out of her chest and eat it! :D
Wait, that's still bad >_>

@Kandri: So...hot bishies can grope random girls? o.o
lol, yes, he has a loin-cloth too

@sfg: that's *exactly* what he's thinking

@Torrent: he's pretty old, but he's not *exactly* a pedo, since it's not really a sexual thing.

@Specter: He was...um...hiding...in the bushes and trees nearby? Yeah, that's it.

@Shadow: HE'S ATTEMPTING TO JILL HER! D=

@Catoni: Yes, it is digital! Thanks!
Violet *is* supposed to be frozen with fear, but you're right on the mark about everything else. I really struggled with this page and it shows. Thank you for the concrit! Much appreciated ^_^

@BabyMarigold: Yeah, it is. I'll have to work on that

@Mika Kana: There isn't really a secret, but I guess if you give me a little time I could do a step-by-step guide :)